Thoughts and observations on marketing & strategy from Bobette Kyle of WebSiteMarketingPlan.com.

November 13, 2007

Copywriting Makeover: It’s What You Say AND How You Say It, Part 2 of 2

Filed under: Marketing Planning, Small Business, Web Marketing — Bobette Kyle @ 2:49 pm

by Karon Thackston © 2007, All Rights Reserved

http://www.WebSiteMarketingPlan.com/online/conversions2.htm

In Part 1 of this series, I introduced you to Announce It!, an online candy-bar-wrapper manufacturer that was seeking professional help with their search engine copywriting. Facing an audience that consisted primarily of women who were purchasing favors for special occasions, Announce It!’s copy had to be spot- on with its communication. The primary problems were that the copy did not convey a sense of excitement or answer all the questions customers might have. It also focused too heavily on the company rather than communicating with the site visitor.

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